THE STORY IS: BRENT STAPLES Just Walk on By Black Men and Public Space 1- explain how Staples describes himself in his essay? How is he sometimes seen by others, and why is the difference significant?
2- Make some connections between Staples' experiences as an individual and his interactions within his community. How does the community in which he lives and the public space through which he moves affect him as an individual?

the red coloration of the lungs looks alarming and adds to the overall message that the flu is threatening apex

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.