QUICK someone say something funny . . It's my bedtime and I can't stop crying

I had tried and yah it ain't good but hope it'll work as a bedtime story.>□<

Explanation:

It was winter time with freezing snow and it was my birthday on 11th December. I celebrated my birthday by calling my friends at home. When they reached, we had some snacks and other things.

After that we roamed and roamed. We clicked a lot of photos. And I was eager to put those photos in my album and tell my parents about how I celebrated my birthday.

Then we went down to the riverside. Wow! It was really beautiful and cold. Wait, what! Some one was going to jump in the river. Woah. I was really scared and closed my eyes tightly. When I opened my eyes...it was just a dream.

explanation:

which character trait does the characterization from the passage above reveal about the grandson? a.honest. b.patient. c.sneaky. d.cruel.

faulty parallelism is a grammar construction where there is no balance in the parts of a sentence they have a similar meaning but the grammar structure is not equivalent.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation's third president.

the problem with the first version is that the sentence:

"jefferson was both the writer of the declaration of independence"

presents jefferson as both a subject and an agent for the verb "write" because if he was "the writer" then the declaration of independence was written by him, besides that fact, the sentence presents a dependent clause.

while the second sentence:

he was the nation's third president.

presents a basic subject+verb+object structure

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in both sentences:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation third president.