English, 26.03.2021 18:50 arringtonlamar
Writing Conventions Exercise
Correct the given example of each of the following writing convention errors by writing a new sentence that avoids the error. Additionally, for EACH writing convention write 2 original examples of that error, and then correct each of those 2 sentences with revised sentences that don’t contain that writing convention error.
Vagueness
Example: The event put on by the city downtown was a wonderful, exciting event for the group of friends to attend together.
Redundancy
Example: It’s almost time for the United States presidential election again, when the citizens of America will go to the polls to choose their leader for the next four years.
Off-Topic
Example: Liberty Middle School, which is part of Hillsborough School District, one of the largest school districts in the country serving nearly 200, 000 students with several hundred schools, including a number of highly distinguished academic institutions, has over a thousand students served by more than a hundred teachers.
Wordiness
In so far as can be accommodated by the current administration, in the current socioeconomic climate prevailing at this time, and given the economic constraints constraining all fiscal measures, decisions, plans, proposals and agreements, the existing progressive economic levies under due consideration will be scaled back to remunerative levels consistent and in direct proportion with budgetary guidelines, recommendations, observations and conclusions. (Hint: “economic levies” are taxes)
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English, 21.06.2019 22:30
Read these lines from denise levertov's poem "in thai binh (peace) province": it is that life, unhurried, sure, persistent, i must bring home when i try to bring the war home. child, river, light. here the future, fabled bird that has migrated way from america, nests, and breeds, and sings, common as any sparrow. which statement best interprets the author's use of metaphor in these lines? a. the metaphor of home suggests that american foreign policy should turn inward. b. the metaphor of the river suggests that life moves ear forward. c. the metaphor of the fabled bird suggests that the war has left americans divided. d. the metaphor of the fabled bird suggests that vietnam will rise to fight again.
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English, 22.06.2019 01:00
To the person who said "why are boys always in their lying nature (school project)" lol but nah you jus mess with the wrong dudes
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English, 22.06.2019 02:30
Which three lines in this expert from anita desai’s games of twilight clearly show an omniscient narrator
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English, 22.06.2019 08:30
Have you ever contributed to “social media outrage” (using your social media accounts to boost the anger about a contemporary issue by forwarding it, liking it, etc.) without stopping to think who might’ve originated the message or what the originator’s motives might’ve been? provide example.
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Writing Conventions Exercise
Correct the given example of each of the following writing convention...
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