Read the paragraph from a personal narrative. It may have seemed like an ordinary day to everyone
else, but to me, it couldn't have been further from it 2
Today was my first day working as a waitress at Pete's
Pizza Haven, and I could not have been more excited.
3
In fact, I was so excited that I rushed to get ready
much faster than I typically do. ^ "I'm ready to go!"
shouted, bouncing down the stairs and flying into the
kitchen, where my mom was making breakfast 5 "
have so much to learn and don't want to be late,"
declared for emphasis. 6 My mom just grinned and
placed a steaming plate of eggs before me.
Which best revises sentence 3 to make it more
precise?
o I had so many grand plans in my head for the
money I would soon be making, and I hurried to get
ready as quickly as I could
O With visions of trendy clothes and piles of spending
money dancing pirouettes in my brain, I took a
shower and got dressed in record time,
As I rushed to shower and be ready on time,
thought about all the different things I could do with
the money I would soon be making.
Because I was so nervous, I could not stop thinking
about my new job even as I rushed to shower and
get ready faster than I ever had

The arctic national wildlife refuge is home to caribou, moose, musk oxen, wolves, foxes, grizzlies, polar bears and migratory birds. leaders in the oil industry believe the refuge is the perfect site for the “environmentally sensitive exploration” of oil. environmentalists are wondering: what will become of the wildlife? president george w. bush, oil-industry leaders and others believe that americans will benefit from the oil that lies under the snow-filled surface of the refuge. in their opinion, the oil will reduce high fuel prices and decrease our need for oil from other countries. i believe the cost of such drilling is too high. i agree with environmentalists who fear that drilling will disturb the migration of more than 130,000 caribou. each spring, the caribou travel 400 miles to give birth on the coastal plain. in this area of the refuge, there are fewer predators. in addition, experts say that the oil in the area adds up to less than a six-month supply. is such a small amount of oil worth the risk drilling poses to these animals? americans are the largest consumers of oil. instead of drilling for oil, we should decrease our need for foreign oil simply by using less. we must all work together to cut back on the oil we use in order to preserve the wildlife of the arctic national wildlife refuge. what type of argument is used in this paragraph? i believe the cost of such drilling is too high. i agree with environmentalists who fear that drilling will disturb the migration of more than 130,000 caribou. each spring, the caribou travel 400 miles to give birth on the coastal plain. in this area of the refuge, there are fewer predators. in addition, experts say that the oil in the area adds up to less than a six-month supply. is such a small amount of oil worth the risk drilling poses to these animals? a. appeal to emotion c. appeal to logic b. bandwagon d. none of the above select the best answer from the choices provided a b c d