Tuesday : Modifiers and (Parallelism) = a pattern in a sentence Totally destroyed by the massive storm, he had to rebuild his shop. He was devastated and feeling sadness and he reached out to others to help. He was poor

the answer is camped

what are the options?

i would say that it is a bad thesis because it doesn't explain what the health risks are. it seems to be a very vague thesis statement. thesis statements need to set up for the entire essay. it needs to give the reasons why people need to stop drinking diet soda.   so, i would say that it is a bad thesis.

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