This is my essay so far is it good? i still need to add my back up links tho. This essay will argue that mountain bikes are better than moto bikes. mountain bikes are better than motorbikes because they are light, meaning you can take them to a lot of places. With mountain bikes you can be free and ride around places at any age but with motorbikes you have to be old enough to have a licence. Mountain bikes can be cheap or expensive so if you're a beginner you can buy a cheap bike to see if you like it.

Mountain bikes are better than moto bikes because mountain bikes are really light compared to a moto bike meaning it is easier for you to take a mountain bike away, To say if you were going on a trip/holiday ride for the day, it is really easy to just get your mountain bike and ride as in a moto bime you would have to get all your gear on first make sure you have a licence and registration, ETC.

With motorbikes you have to have a licence and registration plus you have to be oldernough to get that, but with a mountain bike at any age you can start riding and no ones stopping you. With a motorbike you can't just go for a quick little ride or a cruise you have to be oldernought and have a licence and rego and a helmet.

With Mountain biking you can get bikes for really cheap or expensive so if you are just a beginner you can get a cheap bike and see if you like it and if you really like it upgrade to a slightly better bike, then if you stick with it you might choose to get a more expensive bike so that you can do big stuff with the right type of bike you need. But even if you get an expensive bike it's still not as expensive as a good motorbike.