If there are any errors then please tell me. Grade my Tanka Poem: Food makes me really happy
The amazing flavor rushes through my mouth
I just want to eat
I love eating food all day long
I’m in my happy place while eating

What makes this part of the anecdote about elisa effective? when [elisa] finally walks home, after seven hours of standing at a cash register, her feet hurt. she's wiped out. it makes the reader trust the author as an authority on teenage issues. it uses emotional language to the reader experience elisa's daily challenges. it presents facts to support the long hours elisa is required to work.