(1) Hiring Jane for a position in your restaurant is an awesome decision for you. (2) With her superior organizational skills, ability to
relate to others, and general sense of responsibility, Jane is an ideal
candidate for this position. (3) As her previous employer, I have often
seen her take personal responsibility for solving problems - even
those caused by others. (4) Furthermore, customers frequently praised
her for making a great effort to ensure that they had a positive
experience. (5) Hiring Jane will prove to be a decision nobody will
regret.
Which option best revises this paragraph to maintain a formal tone
throughout?
A. Replace sentence 3 with: As her previous employer, I have often
seen her take personal answerability for deciphering quagmires -
even those resulting from the actions of negligent colleagues.
B. Replace sentence 4 with: Furthermore, she was frequently praised
by customers for making a great effort to ensure that a positive
experience was had.
C. Replace sentence 1 with: Hiring Jane for a position in your
restaurant is a wise decision that will prove beneficial to all.
D. Replace sentence 2 with: With her superior organizational skills,
ability to relate to others, and general sense of responsibility, she'll
be totally great.