Personal Narrative I have written a 750 word essay but I didn't do it correctly need a bit of help.

I submitted my exam they have said that does not include paragraph designations and it must contain an introductory paragraph multiple body paragraphs and a conclusion paragraph can someone explain it to me I have the paragraph but how can I make it better ?

Read the excerpt from chapter 34 of the awakening. "fine fellow, that lebrun," said arobin when robert had gone. "i never heard you speak of him." "i knew him last summer at grand isle," she replied. what becomes apparent during this conversation? robert and arobin are both aware they are rivals for edna’s affections. arobin is unaware of robert’s role in edna’s life, but robert is aware of arobin’s role. robert is completely unaware of arobin’s romantic intentions and love for edna. robert has much more confidence in himself than arobin does.