Valentina is writing a paragraph to evaluate an argument about the destructive uses of palm oil. Which of her drafted thesis statements is most effective? Josie Zhang’s article argues that palm oil is destructive because it is an ingredient in many products that people use regularly. Josie Zhang’s argument is that palm oil is actually dangerous because of many uses we don’t even know about. In her article "Palm Oil Is a Danger," Josie Zhang tries to warn people about how dangerous palm oil is. Josie Zhang effectively argues about the destructive nature of palm oil in her article “Palm Oil Is a Danger.”

D, Josie Zhang effectively argues about the destructive nature of palm oil in her article “Palm Oil Is a Danger.”

Explanation:

According to the paragraph being written by Valentina to evaluate an argument about the destructive uses of palm oil, her drafted thesis statements that is most effective is stating how destructive palm oil can be.

This is important because by listing an expert such as Josie Zhang, it gives her more credibility.

no its not a run on sentence however i think you meant wet suits not sours also a run on sentence would be like surfers surf all winter long in southern california by using wet sours to keep them warm and the live their all year long  

a question like this requires the excerpt to be included in order to answer the question.