Iwake up some nights and wish i had you
i need a reason to smile
you were my smile
i tried to be strong
then what did i do
what have i done
there's no one to keep me warm
at night, when i wake up i wish it was you
oh my what have i done
all these lonely nights to think
to think about the birds
and the boats
man it's crazy in my mind without you
and some nights i rule the world
but most night i'm haunted
i feel like i'm falling
it's a deep black hole
and now i'm waiting for you
baby, i said that i still love you
and you said that doesn't make a difference
you say we are destructive to each other
but don't you see, it's destroying me to not have you

would u change anything about this poem i just wrote and if so what and why?