Just a english quiz!

write narratives to develop real or imagined experiences or events using effective technique, well-chosen details, and well-structured event sequences.

which of these phrases uses the best voice and word choice for a children's fairy tale?

it was a dark and stormy night; the breath of the cool breeze sent shivers up my spine.
the little mice danced with joy because they were so excited about their new home.
her grandmother's voice grew weak as she told the story of her journey to america.
leonard ran so quickly his heart was beating out of his chest and his lungs burned.

Read the following passage: he roamed from chamber to chamber with hurried, unequal, and objectless step. the pallor of his countenance had assumed, if possible, a more ghastly hue— but the luminousness of his eye had utterly gone out. the once occasional huskiness of his tone was heard no more; and a tremulous quaver, as if of extreme terror, habitually characterized his utterance. there were times, indeed, when i thought his unceasingly agitated mind was laboring with some oppressive secret, to divulge which he struggled for the necessary courage. which of the above ideas might be considered foreshadowing? he is wandering all over the chamber his skin tone is really pale his voice is quivering the narrator thinks he is laboring with an oppressive secret