This is an essay that i wrote about why should teens be allowed to play dangerous sports? i wanted to see if anyone has any feedback on what i should be change or add.

why should teens be allowed to play dangerous sports?
there are hundreds of reasons why teens should play dangerous sports. but i will tell you only a few because this will be long otherwise. when teens play dangerous sports like basketball, soccer, hockey , baseball, and especially football because it them mentally & physically. not only that but the reward outweighs the risk by a million.
kid’s lacking sports activities could be resulted in an error for other physical risks. when a child is limited to his/ hers ability to play dangerous sports will not develop their self- affirmation as person fully. i do agree with parents not wanting their children in dangerous activities but disagree with them mostly, because even though the reward is higher than the risk but when a child gets hurt it is critical.
teens plays sports all the time and gets them healthy. it requires you to use your muscles & moving your body. it is no secret that excising is excellent for health. a statement from mayo clinic, physical activity control weight, diseases and combats health conditions, boosts energy, promotes better sleep and improves moodiness. the health advantages of participating in a sport far outweigh the dangers of actual injury. many experts have said that playing dangerous sports can actually boost your brainpower. when they play sports they show greater attention, faster processing speed, and perform better on standardized academic tests than children who are less active.
in sports, individuals caught on to rely & motivate on each other to succeed a important goal when needed. the sports that rely on teamwork & teammates is good for a life lesson. for success in life it depends on how well the players work together. when you first join a sports team you will make friends and have people in your corner. teammates share so many fun & exciting moments.
wow, i am finally done. also the last paragraph is the most important, my opinion of course. what all parents ask is sports safe for there kids. the answer is no. but your kids will have an outstanding performance increase in pretty much everything. college resume will look good. they would have a advantage in a workplace in they played sports when younger such as they are more likely to land high-stays jobs than those who did not.