Use temporal transitions to revise the following paragraph. you may need to create additional details or information. use proper spelling and grammar.
ashley wanted a puppy. he talked to his family for hours. they did not believe he had time to care for the puppy. ashley created a puppy-care plan. his family finally agreed.

Ashley wanted a puppy, therefore he talked to his family for hours. However, they did not believe he had time to care for the puppy. Because of that, Ashley created a puppy-care plan. Finally, his family agreed.

Explanation:

Temporal transitions are words or phrases that connect parts of a text or a speech by demonstrating a relationship between them. That relationship can be:

1. Addition: also, another, finally, first, first of all, for one thing, furthermore, in addition etc.

2. Sequence: first, second, next, last, finally, first of all, concurrently, immediately, prior to, then, at that time, at this point etc.

3. Contrast: but, however, in contrast, on the other hand, on the contrary, yet, on the other hand etc.

4. Exception: however, whereas, on the other hand, while, instead, in spite of, yet etc.

5. Comparison: like, likewise, just, in a different way / sense, similarly, just as etc.

6. Illustration: for example, to illustrate, when/where, for instance, such as, in this case  etc.

7. Location: next to, above, below, beneath, left, right, behind, in front, on top, within  etc.

8. Cause and effect: because, therefore, consequently etc.

9. Emphasis:  most of all, the chief factor,most noteworthy, the principal item, above all, should be noted  etc.

10. Summary or conclusion: to summarize, in short, in brief, finally etc.

In the revision above, we used two conclusion transitions, a contrast one, and a cause-and-effect one - therefore and finally, however, and because (of that), respectively.

i need with the same thing

the original because it was the first to be created which means it is most likely to be tried the hardest. meaning the actors tried their hardest to make it right because shakespeare was so famous.

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