Thesis statement

thesis: the creation of the united states secret endeavor, called the manhattan project, not only served as a major technological breakthrough in harnessing nuclear power but also halted the axis powers from winning world war ii.

do i need to revise my thesis statement and add in more stuff or is it good as is.

It was extremely base of him to desert you in your time of need. ( change into exclamatory sentence)

When you don’t understand a concept during the lecture, it’s to flag it in your notes and leave a blank space so you can fill in more

Chan was leading a group discussion in his university. he discovered that a few participants were dominating the discussion and not letting others speak. what should chan do in such a situation a. chan should allow participants to speak until they are finished b. chan should adjourn the discussion and recommence at a later point c.chan should bar the dominant participants have the freedom to share their opinion d.chan should ensure that all participants have the freedom to share their opinion e.chan should restructure the group so that the dominant participants are isolated