Read this example:

processed foods, such as boxed macaroni and cheese, are the unhealthiest part of the american diet and should be avoided at all costs because they are linked to several health issues like diabetes and obesity. how can you revise this confusing sentence to make it easy to understand?

a. change the order of the words.
b. provide more facts and evidence.
c. use more types of punctuation.
d. shorten it into smaller sentences.

D. Shorten it into smaller sentences

Explanation:

To organize the words it is essential to identify the topic sentence, it should be clear and independent. Then, you can build another sentence with any supportive fact.

for me, i'd go with (c) satisfied or (b) overjoyed because if you read it a couple of times, it makes since that it is c or b. it can't b (a) angry because booker was never angry about anything. at the end of the paragraph, booker states, "i think there are not many men in our country who have had the privilege of naming themselves in the way that i " i think that sentence kind of gives away the also, some words in the paragraph can also you like for example, "indulged," "calmly," "perplexity," "privilege," and defining words that you don't know, can you understand more of that paragraph and it can also increase your comprehension. : )

i'm really rally sorry if i'm incorrect, but if i'm hope this ! : )

to me i think class room sitting education is better. i do online school and i have not learned a think haha. when i sit in the classroom i just sit there and kind of pay attention but still i get so far ahead in the class when im doing online i have nothing else better to do but play video games and i sit in school and learn and have friends and just actually learn. when i'm doing online i sit here listing to music and get on and and look up the answers i guess that is my fault for being a cheater. but to be honest i think sitting in the classroom is better.