Ikinda don't like how this poem sounds. is there anything i should change?

fear is a powerful thing
it can change your life
fear can be big
fear can be small
but no matter how big your fear is
it is fear all in all.
what are you afraid of?
what causes you to bristle in fear
tell me, what are the things that scare you?
what causes your hair to stand
fear is a powerful thing

100 points and brainiest for if u go to my previous questions u can answer the 100 pointers think of an intense argument you had or witnessed sometime in your life. close your eyes and remember every detail. to turn this into a dramatic scene you will need to make changes that will make it make more sense to the audience. 500-600 words a description of the set up that explains what happened before the scene diction that matches the characters character objectives and obstacles are clearly conveyed a scene that escalates in dramatic intensity diction that is appropriate to the audience words that are not wasted in idle chit chat action (stage directions) that enhance the scene proper formatting for drama