Look at the following short outline for an explanatory essay. what is wrong with it?

claim: the aztec empire achieved greater developments in government, society, and culture than the inca empire.

i. introduction
ii. aztec empire
a. political developments
b. social developments
c. cultural developments
iii. inca empire
a. political developments
b. social developments
iv. conclusion

a. it is missing a body.
b. the section about the inca empire needs to address cultural developments.
c. the claim does not present an opinion.
d. the organization is not clear and focused.

The correct answer is B. The section about the Inca Empire needs to address cultural developments

Explanation:

An outline is a summary of the contents that will be included in a text and that are connected to the main claim or thesis statement, which is the position of the author in relation to some topic or subject and which guides the contents of a text or essay. Considering this, the main claim or thesis statement of this explanatory essay outline is that the Aztec Empire achieved more developments than the Inca Empire in terms of government, society, and culture. Due to this, the outline should include the developments of both the Incas and the Aztecs in government, society, and culture, in this way the author can show there were more developments or more significant developments in the Aztec Empire. However, the outline presented does not include the cultural developments for the Inca Empire and thus, the information is incomplete or wrong as this information is necessary for the essay and cannot be ommited.

first of all the mood needs to be defined: it is obviously a mood of deceitful relief and serenity. why? because the cape horn is one of the most violent maritime regions of earth and although it has been left behind, it is a personification of ahab’s delirium and the fact that the end of the passage speaks about it about being “hidden” but “raving” immediately conveys the feeling the calm is not permanent but fleeting.

furthermore, the oxymoron “mild stun'sails” is the first instance of such feeling as the adjective “mild” is associated with “stunned” underscoring the fleeting nature of this “tranquil” moment. and the contrasts keep piling up, with the opposition between “dark den” and “blessed light and air” to end with the final conclusion that leaves the reader with the uneasy knowledge that this is just a reprieve.