What advice would you give to students who take this course in the future who haven't experienced a peer review of their writing?

What does the simile add to the passage

Jargon is a specialized vocabulary of a particular group trade or profession

Mrs. hale (her hand against her pocket). we call it-knot it, mr. henderson.what changes might a director or screenwriter make to the original version of this scene in order to best emphasize themood? cut dialogue from the scene to make it a more approphate lengthupdate the setting to appeal to a more modern-day audienceomit the actions of the characters to avoid confusion and chaoso include the use of lighting, camera angles, and sound effectsmark this and returnnextsubmit