Ineed judging a love poem i wrote. be honest and open. any corrections are beneficial, here it is. if you need any explanations or an input don't be afraid to msg me
this i will wonder, possibly to my demise.
is that the spark of love i see hidden in your eyes?
have found out about my feelings for you?
are you able to return then soon?
if not i understand, you have to go, be your own man.
but if you choose to i'll make a promise, never to forsake you,
only as long as that spark remains in your eyes,
and mine too, then always and forever,
my heart will belong to you.