Read the summary of the story henrique wrote.

the soldiers walked through the rain as they approached the canyon. they’d been traveling for days to reach the dragon’s lair. finally they arrived. then the dragon approached, and it roared. yet, the soldiers faced off with the dragon, despite the noise.

which is the best critique explaining why henrique should revise the summary?

henrique needs to change the sequence of events to be in a logical order.
henrique needs to add some descriptive language to make the story come alive.
henrique needs to add some dialogue to make the point of view consistent.
henrique needs to change the point of view to make the sequence clearer.

Which lines from the speech best supports this topic sentence? and as we walk, we must make the pledge that we shall always march ahead. we cannot turn back. there are those who are asking the devotees of civil rights, "when will you be satisfied? " and they have come to realize that their freedom is inextricably bound to our freedom. we cannot walk alone. we refuse to believe that there are insufficient funds in the great vaults of opportunity of this nation. and so we've come to cash this check, a check that will give us upon demand the riches of freedom and the security of justice. and so let freedom ring from the prodigious hilltops of new hampshire. let freedom ring from the mighty mountains of new york. let freedom ring from the heightening alleghenies of pennsylvania.