What sentence demonstrates the most appropriate tone when writing to an adult?
due to the busy schedules of all members, the committee meeting will be brief. prepare an hour for a brainstorm session.

everyone is very busy, so we have tried to plan for the best use of our time at this week's committee meeting. we would like all members to attend if possible.

the committee has thought about schedules, the best time to meet, how long the meeting should last, and we promise not to take up too much time during the meeting.

there are several members not coming to the committee meeting. everyone who does come is expected to be prepared.

the answer is  The committee has thought about schedules, the best time to meet, how long the meeting should last, and we promise not to take up too much time during the meeting.

faulty parallelism is a grammar construction where there is no balance in the parts of a sentence they have a similar meaning but the grammar structure is not equivalent.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation's third president.

the problem with the first version is that the sentence:

"jefferson was both the writer of the declaration of independence"

presents jefferson as both a subject and an agent for the verb "write" because if he was "the writer" then the declaration of independence was written by him, besides that fact, the sentence presents a dependent clause.

while the second sentence:

he was the nation's third president.

presents a basic subject+verb+object structure

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in both sentences:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation third president.

what passage could you provide the passage.