4. what does revision mean? how is revising different from editing?

Answer and Explanation:

What does revision mean?

Revision means improving the overall quality of a piece by changing parts of it.

How is revising different from editing?

Editing is the process of correcting the text, changing anything that might be an obstacle to reading it. These changes include more straightforward aspects, such as spelling, grammar, sentence structure and punctuation, as well as more intricate aspects such as making complex concepts simpler, trimming excess words, replacing dense language with clear wording etc.

Revising, on the other hand, refers to looking at the text with a new perspective. The changes made to the text will affect how readers understand the ideas discussed. Some examples would be: adding more detail; eliminating unnecessary elements; adding new thoughts; reorganizing ideas etc. A revised text often looks much different than the initial one.

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the narrator is saying that the old lady made her feel uncomfortable. you know this because they say "i found that rather irksome", "perhaps it was her being so upright and trim", and "i don't think it was that, because i thought that quaintly pleasant." hope this !