Which excerpt from dispatches contains sensory language to describe the geography of vietnam?
a)there would be the muted rush of illumination rounds, fired from 60-mm. mortars inside the wire, dropping magnesium-brilliant above the nva trenches for a few seconds, outlining the gaunt, flat spread of the mahogany trees, giving the landscape a ghastly clarity and dying out.

b)it was awesome, worse than anything the lord had ever put down on egypt, and at night, you’d hear the marines talking, watching it, yelling, “get some! ” until they grew quiet and someone would say, “spooky understands.” the nights were very beautiful.

c)once in a while—i guess i saw it happen three or four times in all—there would be a secondary explosion, a direct hit on a supply of nva ammunition. and at night it was beautiful. even the incoming was beautiful at night, beautiful and deeply dreadful.

d)nights were when the air and artillery strikes were heaviest because that was when we knew that the nva was above ground and moving. at night you could lie out on some sandbags and watch the c-47’s mounted with vulcans doing their work.

faulty parallelism is a construction in which two or more parts of a sentence are equivalent in meaning but not grammatically similar in form.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

the hikers knew that the hike was six miles, that it usually required the entire day, and it would not be wise to start after 10: 00 a.m.

the problem is the last sentence, the first two have a basic subject+verb+object structure.

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in all three sentences:

the hikers knew that the hike was six miles, that it usually required the entire day, and it would not be wise to start after 10: 00 a.m.

i don't really love my math teacher

explanation:

and the reason being is because she get me in trouble for the smallest things that i really don't be doing all the time it be my friends that's around me.and i love to do things that other people but when she get on my nerves i don't talk to no one i just sit there and do my work half the time.

really not a paragraph just don't want to say a lot about her : )