What is the purpose of making a reference to the introduction in the conclusion?

Conclusions are brief summaries of what an entire article talks about. During conclusion, a writer makes sure he/she brings all of the information contained in the body of the work and introduction together and passes a final statement. It is ideal to make reference of the introduction at the concluding part of an article, to keep the reader reminded of the original subject matter of discourse.

faulty parallelism is a construction in which two or more parts of a sentence are equivalent in meaning but not grammatically similar in form.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

the hikers knew that the hike was six miles, that it usually required the entire day, and it would not be wise to start after 10: 00 a.m.

the problem is the last sentence, the first two have a basic subject+verb+object structure.

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in all three sentences:

the hikers knew that the hike was six miles, that it usually required the entire day, and it would not be wise to start after 10: 00 a.m.

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what is the meaning of the word superfluous in this sentence?

uneeded!

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