How's my essay so far?

i'm applying for a florida youth advisory council and one of the requirements is to write an essay on traits that i have that's been the biggest asset to me in leadership situations. i only have two paragraphs (one if you're not counting the intro), but i'd very much appreciate feedback on it so far before i continue writing. thnk yu

a, overstatement is the answer

if i was falling raindrop:

1. land safely (pretty sure that’s a tough one)

2. wished that time slowed down

3. a beautiful ending

hello! i hope this you,

literary elements are the essential parts needed to tell any story; they include theme, conflict, characterization, setting, style, and tone. characterization is used by authors to make characters come to life by either describing or highlighting characters traits. characterization is certainly one major literary element harper lee ties to key coming-of-age scenes in the novel to kill a mockingbird and develop her coming-of-age theme.throughout the novel, all three of the major child characters