An example of parallelism in the declaration of independence that the author found too personal was about the
a. freedom of all men
b. color of peoples skin
c. king of england
d. alantic ocean

the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.  

it is revealed by her ability to do what she needs to do