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Correct any sentence fragments and run-on sentences in the following paragraphs.

this summer i will be going to a theme park with my family my best friend will go too. it will be fun. because i like when i get to go with friends. i’ve never been to this theme park before i heard it is very fun. someone in my class. told me that there is a rollercoaster that is the tallest in the whole wide world i can hardly even wait to ride it it will be great.

last summer we didn’t have a very fun vacation because my mom got sick my dad did too. awful. no one felt good. except me. then i was bored. because there wasn’t anyone to do anything with. we had planned to go to the beach to collect shells. shells everywhere. but, i didn’t get to take any home because i was too young to go by myself and everyone else was sick so i went home empty handed and that made me very sad.

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