Ipurchased a kool action game system from bullseye on october 27, 2010, for $109.99. it seemed like a great price until i got it home and began trying to put the thing together. several parts are missing, and the store refuses to exchange the unit because it was on sale. it was not marked “as is,” so i expected a complete and functioning unit. evaluate the clarity and effectiveness of the excerpt from a letter of complaint above. what, if anything, should be added to this excerpt to the reader address the concern? the excerpt is fine as it is; nothing needs to be added. the writer should include the fact that this was a birthday gift. the writer needs to explain what the missing parts look like so they can send them. the model and serial numbers should be added.

they should put what parts where missing , how long it took him to notice they where missing , what was the behavior of the person selling it to him (really happy neutral ...)  and what condition that the system was in when he got it.

I hope this helped some

If not I am sorry

We could say that the letter of claim is not complete. A correct claim letter needs. For instances it would be of great importance if he could add: what the missing parts look like so they can send them and the model and serial numbers so they could track the product.

A complete and formal complaint letter should have the following information:

Claimant's information: first and last names, ID number, address and contact telephone number.

Data of the company: you must identify with name and surname if you know the person to whom you are going to go, if not, the department to which you are going. If you do not know the department to which you should go, it is usually Customer Service

Body of the letter:

Facts or motivation of the complaint (this is exposed although important details could be added): here you must explain in detail what happened. Among the main recommendations for writing a letter of complaint, the most important is that you treat the recipient correctly even though you have great discontent. You can prove the above with attached documents

Request: you must say what you want to request. That is, the solution you propose.

Remedy deadline: you must specify the period of time you give them to be solved.

Acting otherwise: you must indicate what you will do if you do not receive a response or if the answer you are given has no solution. You can specify that you will resort to all existing ways to claim your rights as a consumer / citizen

Farewell, name and signature

here's your

hope you

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