Correct the following paragraph so that it uses the right words and includes appropriate apostrophes.

yesterday, my friends went to the cite of a world-famous puppy park with their dogs. theyre dogs tails were wagging so quickly they looked like helicopters! it was adorable. once they were their, the dogs got to run around and play while the people talked about there favorite animals. yesterday was a lot of fun for dog lovers.

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yesterday, my friends went to the site of a world-famous puppy park with their dog's. their dog's tail were wagging so quickly they looked like helicopter's! it was adorable. once they were there, the dogs got to run around and play while the people talked about their favorite animal's. yesterday was a lot of fun for dog lovers.