Which passage violates all the rules of concise and precise writing? A. A temporarily cool school assembly was attended by more than a
thousand gloomily dressed students, and five students were
arrested by campus police for disorderly conduct, while campus
administrators called on the president to make it rain.
B. The school assembly was disassembled before it began.
C. A school assembly was attended by more than 1,000 students
dressed for rain.
D. None of the above are correct.