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Terri wants to include detail but also revise her sentence to avoid repeating similar ideas. which revised sentence best meets her goals?
1. Samantha and Brittarry walked to the store on 5th Street.
2. They walked quickly to the grocery store to buy doughnuts for their very, very hungry softball teammates,
3. Samantha and Brittany walked quickly to the grocery store to buy doughnuts for their very hungry teammates.
4.They walked quickly to the grocery store on Sth Street to buy snacks because their softball teammates were very, very hungry.​


Terri wants to include detail but also revise her sentence to avoid repeating similar ideas.
 

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