Read the sentence. She likes to go to the beach on the weekends because the beach is where she likes to read.

Which revision corrects the wordiness and redundancy in this sentence?

She likes to go to the beach on the weekends and on the beach is where she likes to read.

On the weekends, she likes to go to the beach and read.

She likes to go to the beach on the weekends because that is the place where she likes to read.

On the weekends, she likes to go to the beach because the beach is where she likes to read.

u dont got a story on here

explanation:

at the beginning of the story, elisa just has the small idea of wanting more attention, but as the story progressed, her desire for more attention grew larger. before she talked to the man with the wagon she was just focused on her chrysanthemums but when she talked to him and got some attention she enjoyed it, so she decided to get all dolled up for henry. but when they were on the way to dinner she was so upset because she saw the flowers on the side of the road and realized the man didn't take interest in her like she thought.