Read the paragraph below. Which would be the most helpful peer review comment to make about the paragraph’s words and sentences? Wolves are a familiar animal in stories and movies. They are usually the bad animal. Some people think wolves are dangerous to people. But is this the truth? Wolves eat sheep and people don’t like that because they’re raising the sheep for themselves and some wolves can even take down cattle. Wolves make scary howls that can frighten people. But a sound can’t hurt you!

“You use the word “wolf” a lot. Can you find a more interesting way to say “wolf”?”

“I think wolves are scary, too. You’ll have to do more to convince me that they’re not!”

“I like your sentences about wolves, especially the ones where you describe how scary they are.”

“Your fifth sentence has some interesting ideas. But too many of them! You need to make this sentence several different sentence

Who is ¨ the guilty party¨ at the end of the text, and how do his actions contribute to the storys theme?

What are the best types of evidence to use within the body paragraphs of an argument essay? unsupported opinions logical fallacies visual aids facts and statistics

What theme is the main theme of this excerpt from the metal pig by hans christian andersen? in the garden of the grand duke's palace under the roof of one of the wings were a thousand roses bloom in winter, a little ragged boy had been sitting the whole day long. the boy might serve as a type of italy lovely and smiling and yet suffering. he was hungry and thirsty but no one gave him anything and when it became dark and they were about to close the gardens, the porter turned him out. a long time he stood musing on the bridge which crosses the arno and looking at the glittering stars that were reflected in the water which flowed between him and the wonderful marble bridge trinita. he then walked away towards the metal pig, half note down, clasped it with his arms, and, putting his mouth to the shining snout, drink deep droughts of the fresh water. close-by lay a few salad leaves into chestnuts, which register for his supper. no one was in the street but himself. it belonged only to him. he boldly seated himself on the pig's back, leaned forward so that his curly head could rest on the head of the animal, and, before he was aware, fell asleep. it was midnight. the metal pig raised himself gently, and the boy heard him say quite distinctly, hold tight little boy, for i am going to run, and way he started for most wonderful ride first they arrived at the p as the del granduca and the metal horse which bears the dukes statue made allowed