Read this introductory paragraph of a research paper. Which sentence contains the author’s thesis statement? When I was born, it was just my mother and me. My mother worked very hard and was able to climb the corporate ladder to get where she is today. Because of this, she spent a lot of time traveling to places all over the world. Sometimes she took me with her, but when she couldn’t I spent a lot of time with my grandparents and my Aunt Peggy. It may sound like the opposite of the ideal childhood, but my travels with my mother taught me about other cultures and opened my eyes to those around me.

Read the sentence below about the chicago fire of 1871. schaffer told someone else to strike the wrong alarm box and that caused a miscommunication during the chicago fire of 1871. which revision is the best example of adding concrete details? schaffer told another person in his office to sound the wrong alarm and that caused a big miscommunication during the chicago fire. schaffer told his assistant to strike the wrong alarm box and that caused a miscommunication during the massive chicago fire of 1871. schaffer mistakenly told his assistant to strike alarm box 342 instead of the correct box and that caused a miscommunication during a fire in chicago. schaffer mistakenly told his assistant to strike alarm box 342, and as a result, firefighters were directed to an incorrect location during the chicago fire of 1871.