write a letter to your friend telling him or her how you are planning to celebrate this year's birthday​

212, L.K. Road,

Kanpur

25th June, 2017

Dear Akshay

I hope you are doing fine. I am having a good time these days. I am writing this letter to share how I celebrated my birthday this year.

This year I had planned my party differently from the previous years and did not celebrate it at home. My parents had made arrangements in a restaurant. I had invited about fifteen of my friends. We had lots of fun games initially and then there was a dance floor also where we all danced a lot. My friends enjoyed thoroughly and even I had a great time, but I missed you a lot.

Please make a program of visiting Kanpur during the vacations.

Yours truly

Karan

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From Queen  

Hello, my dear friend! I hope you are doing well.

I am writing this letter because I really missed you on my birthday. I wanted to celebrate with you, but unfortunately, you were not available. But anyway, it is okay. I thought I would write everything to you.

This year I turned 16, I throw a party at my farmhouse. There were lot of friends, and they helped me with decorating the farmhouse. We had drinks and food too. There were enough games which were organized and it was an amazing day. All were happy with the arrangements. Moreover, we had a dance performance as well. It was dazzling. All the people enjoyed to the fullest. Even I did. We had a cake too, it was a special cake which we had ordered. Many of my relatives and friends came. All gave gifts too, we arranged some return gifts too for some important guests.

I missed you a lot, I really missed your company around.

Take care of yourself, and write back to me.

Yours loving

~queen~

Explanation:

type of error:

the error in the sentence is a "dangling modifier". a dangling modifier is a phrase, word or clause that "dangles" because there is not target to modify. in this case, "after mopping the floor" is the dangling modifier since it has no word to modify. the noun "house" cannot mop the floor; therefore there is a mistake in the writing of the sentence.

i think it may be b, i'm not exactly too sure on this. but b seems to make more sense.