Which of these comments would be the MOST helpful in a peer review? “This is a great description. But you need to add details.”

“This is a great description--it gives enough details that I can imagine the way each object looks and feels.”

“I like the transitional tags."

“This is a great description because it includes a lot of details and interesting words.”

How does crane's depiction of the way information was spread in the nineteenth century affect the novel? crane seeks to use the novel as a way to criticize the journalists of the time for how they glorified war as a means of union propaganda. by depicting the extent to which newspapers were circulated, crane seeks to expose the lack of unbiased reporting at the time. by giving newspapers a major role in the novel, crane seeks to make a connection between the increasing role of the military in national affairs and the decline of farming. crane captures the power of journalistic reports at a time when it was the primary means of transmitting information to a broad audience by showing its influence on henry.