(9) Self-control also fails when it is tired. (10) You only have so much of it What is the best revising comment to make to a classmate about sentences 9 and 10?
The sentences are choppy and should be combined.
Sentence 9 is off topic and should be deleted.
Sentence 10 is a fragment and should be corrected.
The sentences are fine the way they are.

What is articulating thoughts and ideas effectively using oral written and non-verbal skills a part of

Subject: save the whales! dear professor crest, i know you are really busy and everything, but i was hoping that you could spend more time thinking about how to save the whales. it’s up to us to speak up on their behalf. it’s really wrong that some amusement parks use these poor, defenseless animals for recreational purposes. this must be stopped, and you’re the person to do it! ttyl, jules which revisions would make this e-mail more formal? check all that apply. a. removing the contractions b. removing the exclamation points c. removing the salutation d. removing the slang and casual speech e. removing the information about amusement parks

Ead the excerpt and answer the question. joey was three years younger than i, and a boy, and therefore vastly inferior. this sentence tells readers how the family treats its children what lizabeth thinks of her brother how miss lottie acts toward children what the community thinks of young males