Which revision of the passage makes the best use of transitions? Neville was a brooding and melancholy soul. Nothing bad ever happened to him. He moped
around his house and said things like, "The dark melodies call to me." He never found true
happiness in life.
# Choice
A. Neville was a brooding and melancholy soul. Moreover, nothing bad ever
happened to him. Unfortunately, he moped around his house and said things
like, "The dark melodies call to me." In summary, he never found true
happiness in life.
B. Neville was a brooding and melancholy soul. Of course, nothing bad ever
happened to him. Furthermore, he moped around his house and said things
like, "The dark melodies call to me." Next, he never found true happiness in
life.
C. Neville was a brooding and melancholy soul. Granted, nothing bad ever
happened to him, but he moped around his house and said things like, "The
dark melodies call to me." Alas, he never found true happiness in life.
D. Neville was a brooding and melancholy soul. Then nothing bad ever happened
to him. Next, he moped around his house and said things like, "The dark
melodies call to me." Finally, he never found true happiness in life.