NEED YOUR OPINION IS THIS GOOD? Dear Mr. Joseph Mallord William Turner,
I’m such a fan of your artwork, I heard you were born in Covent Garden, London on April 23, 1775. As a little kid, I’ve always seen my mom paint different types of famous paintings, including one of yours called Peace- Burial at Sea. After doing some research, I read that you went to The Royal Academy of Arts in London. This probably was a great experience for you as you studied with other future famous artists. During Spring break I visited London with my family and I saw your masterpieces in the National Gallery and the Tate Gallery in London.
One of my favorite paintings is Peace- Burial at sea because I love the style of Romanticism and I appreciate the techniques used in paintings from the 1800s. I have read that your painting was dedicated to your friend that had passed in a war. Some research that I’ve done is Expressive colorization imaginative landscapes and turbulent often violent marine paintings is how you gained fame. I’ve heard you served as an architectural draftsman and that you enrolled when you were only 14 years old. Since you were a professor what’s it like? Do you like having many jobs?
Your peace - Burial sea painting looks really realistic, The shadow and the colors that you chose are my favorite parts. I love how it has a feeling like it was made in the 1800s which it was, The colors are not varied but it still shows a message. I love how the light comes through and the brushstrokes. At first, when I saw your painting I thought it was boring because I couldn’t see anything special yet. In my opinion, I would rather see a 3-dimensional painting like when a real object is used. After seeing your painting a few times I could actually see the message. Since your friend had passed for your birthday present I would give you a mini ship because the painting includes a ship and it would be meaningful to him because it would remind him of his friend and I’ll add a picture of him to represent him and to remember him.