Read the passage, which lacks vivid description, strong imagery, and dialogue. Then rewrite the passage to include description and dialogue in a way that shows Denise
is relieved and joyful.
Passage
Just as the final school bell rang, Ms. Smithers handed Denise the math test.
Denise turned away and flipped it over to reveal the grade, and then she
stepped out into the hallway and closed the door. She felt happy. Denise
walked down the school hallway and out into the afternoon where her mother
was waiting. Denise showed her the test, and her mother was happy too,
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what is the first step in analyzing or preparing a summary for a piece of literature?

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serve the people! ,” smoothly translated by julia lovell, offers an initial sample of yan lianke’s writing to an english-speaking audience. a bluntly drawn, mildly erotic fable, it teases mao zedong by poking fun at a true believer who obeys the chairman’s precepts too literally. to a western sensibility, the broad strokes of yan lianke’s humor would seem to pose little risk of inciting rebellion, whether of the flesh or of the body politic. but then, part of the book’s attraction is that it doesn’t have a western sensibility. it lets the reader see — or rather, intuit — what jokes chinese officials don’t consider funny, and how very little it takes for a writer to be branded an incendiary in 21st-century china, more than three decades after the death of mao, a decade after the death of deng xiaoping and seven years since china entered the world trade organization, a move that would seem to signal a willingness (however wary) to mingle with the rest of the world.