PLEASE HELP ASAP All of these sentences appear in a reflective essay. Which sentence demonstrates that the writer understands how to revise for better use of sensory details?
1. Then she said, “We can’t be friends anymore.”
2. The cold rain battered the tin roof we huddled under.
3. I was devastated and started to cry.
4. Now I know what it’s like to lose a best friend.

Which statement best evaluates the author's use of pacing in the passage? a. the author's use of pacing is not effective, because the imagery and figurative language don't adequately describe either the cheetah or the gazelle. b. the author's use of pacing is effective, because the imagery and figurative language speed up the action, making the scene come alive for the reader. c. the author's use of pacing is effective, because the long, complex sentences the reader fully understand the power and beauty of nature. d. the author's use of pacing is not effective, because the long, complex sentences distract from the sense of stress and anxiety the passage should convey.

“to build a fire” what wild idea does the man conjure up as a last resort?

Identify the homophone pair that needs to be corrected in these sentences. if your going to the concert, may i ride in you're car too? their house is on the way there. it's going to be a long night, since it's already close to midnight. a. it's/its b.your/you're c.to/too d.their/there