Drag each statement to the correct location. Learning to communicate is an important part of the peer review process. Along with making sure that you give and receive feedback in a clear manner, you must ensure that feedback is constructive. Separate the following peer review feedback statements into the "Do" and "Don’t" categories.

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1. “Your main idea isn’t very good.”

2. “I like the quotation from the
novel you worked into your
conclusion. It really helps support
the main idea of your essay.”

3.“I like what you are trying
to say here, but I think you
need to use a few examples
to support your point.”

4. “Add some quotes to the essay.”
“Using the opinion of other

5.
“I like what you are trying
to say here, but I think you
need to use a few examples
to support your point.”
“Add some quotes to the essay.”
“Using the opinion of other
characters to justify why
your character is relatable
was a great idea.”

“I don’t like this section;
rewrite it and make it better.”

do-

dont-

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)

cinderrella becuase she is an old character and well famous

the author is intending to draw attention to the plight of refugees, editorial and biography support this. both workpieces make the reader empathize with enrique as well as with the other young migrants from central america. the writer, however, is using a different approach to each text.

the editorial includes strong words to persuade readers. he is trying hard to convince readers in the us to change its refugee approach.

the biography relies on narrative techniques and figurative language which the writer uses wisely in the setting, characterization, and personification to educate readers on the topic.

specific audience will understand the main ideas. for example, if you were writing an instruction manual for rocket scientists, it would likely look very different from one you would write for young children. your language, tone, and writing style would change significantly.