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End of Semester Test: Indiana English 9B
The following is a draft of a student essay. It may contain
errors
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Select the correct answer.
Too Much Need for Approval
(1) People often think that they are being individuals by
expressing themselves when in fact they are just conforming to
societal expectations. (2) Whether it is through buying the latest
clothing or hiking the latest post
Which thesis statement should be included to effectively introduce the claim?

"get off of your lazy bum and come running with me or i'm dumping this pitcher of water on u " u say with a smile. she thinks your joking so she ignores you about 10 seconds later shes screaming wile water is dripping everywhere you say "here comes the second one! " then you here her say okay, your such a j e r k ! ill be ready in 5 put the pitcher down " she say in an angry tone. and you smile in victory

good enough?

they would have to clean it very clean

the answer should be the first one. "many people find his lyrics very moving."

it by far makes the most grammatical sense and is very objective, removing any first person from the original sentence and keeping with the sentence fluency.