You will edit and revise your argumentative essay and then submit a polished final draft. You will also submit a reflection paragraph in which you discuss three changes you have made and how they improved your essay. Revisions made include transitions, sentence variety, weak verbs, redundancy, and misplaced modifiers. View the grading rubric for the assessment.
Make edits and revisions based on written feedback, your DBA, and reminders in this lesson.
Write a reflection paragraph discussing three changes you made to your essay. Explain how you feel each change strengthened your argument.
Save your final draft and your reflection essay to your computer or drive.
Submit your complete final draft and your reflection paragraph in 06.10 The Finishing Touches.

d.) then bernice winced as marjorie tossed her own hair over her shoulders and began to twist it slowly into two long blond braids until in her cream-colored negligée she looked like a delicate painting of some saxon princess. fascinated, bernice watched the braids grow. heavy and luxurious they were, moving under the supple fingers like restive snakes—and to bernice remained this relic and the curling iron and a to-morrow full of eyes.

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answer: having more negative in their interactions with their child more or likely because of issues with stress and depression.

explanation:

teenage parents may also have less time as they juggle their responsibilities to spend with their child which can make the child feel lonesome and not enough trust was made to create a foundation between the parent and the child.

imagery :

"facing the rising sun of our new day begun"

paints a vivid picture and emphasizes the meaning, purpose, and emotional weight of the piece

alliteration:

"sing a song full of the faith".

contributes to the musical quality

oxymoron:

"silent tears"

intensifies the emotional content of the poem

simile :

"loud as the rolling sea"

conveys a sense of widespread rejoicing

explanation:

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