Which revision would most improve this excerpt from a narrative? Now Kelly keeps her paint set high on a shelf in the closet. Jeremy had gotten paint everywhere - even on the ceiling! Kelly normally gets along great with her little brother, Jeremy. She loves to draw and paint, and Jeremy loves trying to help out. One day, when Kelly was playing outside, Jeremy helped himself to her paint set. O A. Introducing the main characters O B. Giving specific details about the paint set O C. Including a conflict or problem D. Narrating the events in chronological order PREVIOUS​

Isaw my future flash before me and it did not take me anytime to slow down. i need to replace the words "it did".

Read the excerpt from "the most dangerous game." again rainsford lifted the heavy knocker, and let it fall. the door opened then, opened as suddenly as if it were on a spring, and rainsford stood blinking in the river of glaring gold light that poured out. the first thing rainsford's eyes discerned was the largest man rainsford had ever seen—a gigantic creature, solidly made and black bearded to the waist. in his hand the man held a long-barreled revolver, and he was pointing it straight at rainsford's heart. the details of this excerpt show that rainsford sees ivan as a(n) individual.

Lens quotation: "character is what you are in the dark." -dwight lyman moody