Which sentence should be revised to improve conciseness and focus? es )
A)
The outfielder intently watched the batter and the runner on first base.
B)
The score was tied when the umpire stopped the game because of
Lightning
)
A twisted knee playing baseball was the reason Clay had to wear a knee
brace.
D)
The coach switched pitchers during the seventh inning because he wanted
to win the game.