Carefully retype this sentence using correct capitalization. mr. jones, who worked for the internal revenue service, retired after 27 years of employment.

For this one is it just Mr. Jones or what else would need to be capitalized?

Mr. Jones, who worked for the Internal Revenue Service, retired after 27 years of employment.

Explanation: have a nice day :)

Mr. Jones, who worked for the Internal Revenue Service, retired after 27 years of employment.

Explanation: Capitalize company names unless there is a lowercase letter in the name. Example: eBay

i don't think that you should. it looks amazing to me! it is definitely a lot better than the things that i can draw ; ~ ;

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