Read the sentence. Some sports enthusiasts become quite emotional when their team makes an error or loses a game.

Which revisions create a more informal style?

Select the two best answers.

A.

People who follow sports react emotionally when their teams are playing.

B.

Big sports fans lose their minds any time their teams mess up.

C.

When they are supporting their sports teams, people express a range of emotions.

D.

Sports fans are known to freak out any time things aren't going great for their team.

 B and D

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