Using the ideas you previously wrote in your Argument Organizer and introduction, you will write the body paragraphs of your argument. Important note: You will submit your introduction and body for this assignment.

View the grading rubric as you complete your work. This is your guide to a super submission.

You have previously written the introduction to your argument. Now you will write the body paragraphs to continue your argument.
Be sure to use the information you previously wrote in your Argument Organizer.
In three body paragraphs, remember to include:
BODY PARAGRAPH 1: a strong reason for your claim and researched fact to support your claim
BODY PARAGRAPH 2: another strong reason for your claim and researched fact to support your claim
BODY PARAGRAPH 3: a counterclaim against your argument, a rebuttal, and a researched fact to support your rebuttal
Transitions
Signal phrases to indicate quotes or facts that are not your ideas
Write three or more complete sentences in each paragraph
Write in formal style using the third person point of view.
Use correct grammar, punctuation, and spelling.
Add your introduction to the body.
Save your work to your computer or drive.
Submit your work in 06.07 Build a Convincing Argument.

the way you did it is okay (not really the best) but it could use a little work.

explanation:

dreams can say a lot about the personalities,thoughts, feelings, and intentions of people, what exactly do dreams mean? are the dreams we have   a result of our thinking process or are they connected to our hidden desires? facts and fiction will be used to uncover the truth behind our dreams.

animal farm, written by george orwell, is a representation of russia after the revolution that led stalin to take over power.

in this excerpt, the central idea seems to be that the animals (a representation of society), when they believe to be working for a greater good and equality, are obedient and productive. they were convinced that, after expelling the owner (jones) from the farm, they would live in harmony and be fairly treated.

as we know, the pigs become the leaders and grow more selfish and dictatorial with time. in the end, they look and act in a way so similar to humans that it is impossible to tell the difference. the ideals of equality are shattered, and the farm turns out to be worse than it was before. the animals are manipulated with false propaganda and forced to work in order to enrich the pigs.

it should be repealed cuase its not fair